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Title: CRIIIIIIIIT?
Post by: Morgan on July 06, 2008, 01:30:31 AM
crit. i can has it?

(http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs31/f/2008/187/d/4/ONE_DAY_YOU_WILL_TEACH_ME___by_time.png)

i didn't use a reference on this so i'd like crits, redlines, and whatever else you can throw at me for me to see how my grasp of anatomy is moving along.

yeah, i know the light source is uh. backwards but w/e disregard that plz.
Title: Re: CRIIIIIIIIT?
Post by: Azula on July 06, 2008, 06:22:16 AM
I AM REALLY FUCKING BORED.

(http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/8779/huhdw3.png)

i don't feel like typin shit up so hit me up on aim if you wanna know shit. i didnt do the head cuz i had an argument with myself about it
Title: Re: CRIIIIIIIIT?
Post by: D0m on July 06, 2008, 04:49:35 PM
I'd add some lines to the grass and the horizon. Couldn't hurt.
Title: Re: CRIIIIIIIIT?
Post by: Sesruc on July 06, 2008, 09:27:49 PM
(http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/6388/redlinenk1.jpg)

lol sorry for having to reiterate the arm length problem
i should've looked at worm's redline some more first!


main problems that i noticed was the shoulder area (since this is a profile view? right. and the shoulder you drew seemed a little too 3/4-ish for the position you drew morgan in), arm length, and breast position.

i suck at legs so i had no clue what to do.

and uhh. i redlined the thumb for you too even though that's not a huge part of the picture.

and just to throw this in, i think it's a very nice picture. the coloring is soft and i like how the petals fade off.
Title: Re: CRIIIIIIIIT?
Post by: Morgan on July 07, 2008, 10:56:54 AM
I'd add some lines to the grass and the horizon. Couldn't hurt.
i tried that originally and it made it seem like the grass was too close, which is why i just had it go lol horizon line.

also, tina and ses, thanks, i actually didn't notice the arm was too long. knew the leg was too long after i finished, though. i allllways have problems with making arms too long. i'll try to fix that though. :]
Title: Re: CRIIIIIIIIT?
Post by: Sync on July 09, 2008, 07:44:56 PM
not a crit but that is a really good pic.