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Author Topic: Constructive Criticism + Red line help please  (Read 778 times)

Offline Rex T-Rex

Constructive Criticism + Red line help please
«: February 22, 2010, 11:14:09 AM»
So I'm working on a character of mine and I'd appreciate some help with it. The main thing that I really want help with is making sure that he actually looks Japanese. I don't like anime style, and that's not what I'm going for. I'm trying to keep to my at least semi-realism style. My only problem is that, unfortunately, all of my characters tend to look... well quite frankly rather similar in the face. So I want it to be clear that he's Japanese, but I don't want some over exaggerated cartoony expression to show his nationality.
I was using pictures like these to help me while I was drawing him.
http://i.a.cnn.net/si/2008/writers/justin_gimelstob/02/22/nishikori/p1_nishikori_0219.jpg
http://denomalaysubs.files.wordpress.com/2007/10/perfectaction.jpg
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_uVmG0LBTSi4/R29xFgVi1KI/AAAAAAAAAWw/b_S_MYUuWsM/s400/43723.jpg

So here's Yusuke. I'd greatly appreciate some constructive criticism and maybe even red-lining. Just, no anime stuff, please.
Also, in this image he's supposed to be sitting sideways on a tilted motorcycle. That's why he's posed the way he is.
http://www.furcartzone.com/gallery/17/282-220210133817.png

« Last Edit: February 22, 2010, 03:55:15 PM by Rex T-Rex »
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Offline #Se

Re: Constructive Criticism + Red line help please
«Reply #1: February 22, 2010, 02:54:51 PM»
Im not an artist, but your lovly picture reminded me of a old movie i saw when i was a kid. "Magic Boy"

http://www.tomodachi.de/html/ant/service/ep_guide/der_zauberer_und_die_banditen.html

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JlUFC1HZ59w
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Offline Rex T-Rex

Re: Constructive Criticism + Red line help please
«Reply #2: February 22, 2010, 03:08:47 PM»
Oh, hehe a Toei movie. I love Toei. Yusuke here is actually a Kamen Rider. Thanks for the comment.
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