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Author Topic: Crit/red lines on akita av!  (Read 838 times)

Offline Goldrush

Crit/red lines on akita av!
«: March 14, 2010, 05:34:44 PM»


Constructive crit and/or red lines much appreciated, thanks in advance. =]

« Last Edit: March 14, 2010, 05:57:26 PM by Goldrush »
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Offline Rex T-Rex

Re: Crit/red lines on akita av!
«Reply #1: March 14, 2010, 07:42:07 PM»
Akitas are very thick powerful dogs. What you have here looks a bit too slim and more husky-like but with tight tails.
I would suggest thickening the legs and the snout a bit.

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Offline Goldrush

Re: Crit/red lines on akita av!
«Reply #2: March 16, 2010, 10:22:20 AM»
Thanks Rex! ^.^ Those references were helpful too. Hopefully I've made it look a bit more akita like now, thickened it's legs
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Offline Sync

Re: Crit/red lines on akita av!
«Reply #3: March 16, 2010, 10:27:22 AM»
i don't feel the face is in proper perspective. furcadia isometric view sort of looks from the top down and we can only see the side of the akita's head?

the legs look off, the front ones look to close and the back ones too far apart. i'd use a grid to help. i'd grab one and type more but it's almost time for class.

Offline Goldrush

Re: Crit/red lines on akita av!
«Reply #4: March 17, 2010, 06:06:39 PM»
oh yeah, i had a difficulty doing the head =/ thanks for replying.
also, a grid would be super helpful ^^
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