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Author Topic: portrait critique + help?  (Read 1008 times)

Offline bowlegged

portrait critique + help?
«: March 27, 2010, 10:47:52 PM»
- fix2.

i need all the critique i can get, and honestly i feel like somethings off or wrong by just looking at it, face too long? left arm is weird? bun is off.. idk help me out and how i can improve.
« Last Edit: March 28, 2010, 12:57:08 AM by Curly Top »

 
        

Offline Syke

Re: portrait critique + help?
«Reply #1: March 27, 2010, 11:55:47 PM»
i think the eyes are to high, and he left arm is kinda wierd looking

Offline Rex T-Rex

Re: portrait critique + help?
«Reply #2: March 28, 2010, 12:01:11 AM»
I agree on the eyes. Face length as a whole may not be an issue if this is a character with a longer face, but the eyes do seem a bit to high up. Honestly her head is a littler weird. Like there's an opening to it from the pure whiteness but nothing connecting and..  dunno it's giving me optical illusion sickness. x.x
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Offline bowlegged

Re: portrait critique + help?
«Reply #3: March 28, 2010, 12:39:37 AM»
haha, i totally get what you mean with the whole optical-illusion sickness thats exactly what i am going through. ill play around with the eyes and see if its any better D:
edit : kay i moved the eyes, better? but i have no clue how to fix the arm .. faill.
« Last Edit: March 28, 2010, 12:43:37 AM by Curly Top »

Offline Azula

Re: portrait critique + help?
«Reply #4: March 28, 2010, 12:44:57 AM»
the head should be a little bit more wide.

Offline bowlegged

Re: portrait critique + help?
«Reply #5: March 28, 2010, 01:26:00 PM»
i made the face wider.. starting to look a bit better.

Offline Grumpyskunk

Re: portrait critique + help?
«Reply #6: March 28, 2010, 07:44:37 PM»
She has no clavicle. Just something that personally irks me. And her upper body looks REALLY long to me for some reason.

 

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