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Author Topic: A work-in-progress  (Read 628 times)

Offline Rigel

A work-in-progress
«: September 17, 2010, 03:37:15 PM»
Something I've been working on for a while.  It's going to be 100% original patchwork, and is based mainly on houses in the city of St. Joseph, Michigan, where a lot of my relatives live.  I've only got four areas under construction, but I think it's a fairly good amount.

Any comments, or ways to make it look better would be awesome.

(First two images resized)






 
        

Offline fara

Re: A work-in-progress
«Reply #1: September 21, 2010, 06:35:44 PM»
I think almost all of it looks great! The only problem I have is with the glass front on the clock. The way you have it shaded makes it look more like cobwebs and not the reflection/shine you were going for. Maybe try making it a bit lighter or bluer in color.
Unless of course, you were actually going for spiderwebs, then by all means ignore!

Offline Rigel

Re: A work-in-progress
«Reply #2: September 23, 2010, 06:13:18 PM»
I'm going for shine, not cobwebs.  XD  I'll try tweaking the color like you suggested.  :3

 

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