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Author Topic: Critic/Red line please?  (Read 828 times)

Offline Cameil

Critic/Red line please?
«: May 10, 2008, 09:17:52 PM»
I would love some advice on a new drawing I am working on. It’s symbolic of human characters in feral forms type thing and the sizes should be off. (The wolf should be about as big as the lion xD)
I’m open to all types of critic/advice and red lining is often better for me.
Please and Ty <33


http://www.furcartzone.com/index.php?action=gallery;sa=view;id=4665
« Last Edit: May 22, 2008, 03:38:43 PM by Cameil »

 
        

Offline Cameil

Re: Critic/Red line please?
«Reply #1: May 22, 2008, 03:39:04 PM»
- art change o:

Offline alexandra

Re: Critic/Red line please?
«Reply #2: May 26, 2008, 08:34:19 AM»
well i'm nowhere close to perfect but i gave it a shot n_n;



the only thing that i see you should work on is the snarls. when an animal snarls, (and even if you make an attempt to lol) clumps of skin on the nose, near the eyes and mouth whill bunch up.




...yeah ok now to the redline. i didnt correct much


http://isntthisnice.zoomshare.com/files/312_22_05_08_3_27_11.bmp

 

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