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Author Topic: blah, critique please?  (Read 735 times)

Offline Ith

blah, critique please?
«: May 10, 2008, 10:06:34 PM»

Meh, I was just fooling around
and I came out with this
I haven't the slightest clue what to do next, but I do know it needs to be crit' hardcore <3


Offline Katie!

Re: blah, critique please?
«Reply #1: May 16, 2008, 02:06:55 PM»
Ooo! Looks like a great start.
I'd say add more hair, especially behind the ears. Otherwise her head sort of looks flat. If you want redlines to show you what I mean, let me know.
You might want to consider making the pupil of the eye more round, since pupils tend to be circles.