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Author Topic: Advice/tips/critique please? :3  (Read 608 times)

Offline Diamante

Advice/tips/critique please? :3
«: January 02, 2012, 03:47:41 AM»
This portrait took about 1-2 hours to make (longer than it should've..) and i'm just experimenting with new styles, special thanks to tourtu for some tips. :3



Any advice, tips or critique would be greatly appreciated, thank you. c:


Thank you for all advice!
LOGS:::
Edited from advice by: Geisteskrank
« Last Edit: January 02, 2012, 06:12:39 AM by Diamante »

 
        

Offline Geisteskrank

Re: Advice/tips/critique please? :3
«Reply #1: January 02, 2012, 05:50:56 AM»
1-2 hours is just fine for any piece. There's no time limit on art. :] I have stuff I've worked on for longer than that and isn't as finished as this.

Your shading is nicely placed, but it could use more contrast (darker darks and lighter lights) in the places where shadows or highlights are the strongest, respectively.
The lips are well drawn, but they look a little small. Maybe just scaling them up a tad will make them fit in nicer. Upping their contrast and changing their color to something even just a li'l warmer will make them pop, too. :3

I hope this helps!

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