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Author Topic: Crit all to hell plz  (Read 2344 times)

Offline Arley

Crit all to hell plz
«: May 24, 2008, 02:33:08 PM»
Well I just want some crits so I can get better. I'm gonna show you the 10 oc meme pictures I drew. I'm doing a meme and I'm supposed to introduce the chars so here they are:


click to enlarge

Personally, I like Homos', my stalker chars', and Tedds'. XD note that this is pretty much the rough draft. That's why there's prolly a lot of crappy lines. I haven't finished my sketches yet and when I do I'll line it and flatcolor it.

CRITS PLZ
« Last Edit: July 08, 2008, 10:38:48 PM by Arley »

 
        

Offline Morgan

Re: Tips/critique/prices?
«Reply #1: May 24, 2008, 02:56:11 PM»
i dooont think youre quite ready to charge $15, honestly. $10 is good.

Offline Arley

Re: Tips/critique/prices?
«Reply #2: May 24, 2008, 03:15:24 PM»
Morgan: Ty for your opinion n_n

Offline Gengar

Re: Tips/critique/prices?
«Reply #3: May 24, 2008, 04:50:13 PM»
Same thing here. Not quite enough experience, and, not being mean or anything, since I am collabing with you after all, its just not worth over 10 dollars yet. (hint: YET.)
Gengar -

Offline Sync

Re: Tips/critique/prices?
«Reply #4: May 24, 2008, 05:02:22 PM»
yeah i think 10 is good.
the only thing i can really point out need need improvement in is lineart? while i always like your coloring, some of your linearts i just don't.

Offline Arley

Re: Tips/critique/prices?
«Reply #5: May 24, 2008, 05:07:14 PM»
Symbol and Sync: Ty for your opinions! xD It's true, Sync. Some of my lineart sucks .w.

Offline Mala

Re: Tips/critique/prices?
«Reply #6: May 24, 2008, 11:29:11 PM»
$10 sounds good. You have really nice shading, and okay lineart. I'm sure you can up it to $15 soon.

Offline Arley

Re: Tips/critique/prices?
«Reply #7: May 25, 2008, 08:33:48 AM»
Mina: Ty for your opinion! <3

Sesruc

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #8: May 25, 2008, 08:49:54 AM»
mind giving us some things that you want us to critique?
i'm really lazy when i comes to having to browse through someone's gallery. x:

Offline Arley

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #9: May 25, 2008, 08:53:24 AM»
mind giving us some things that you want us to critique?
i'm really lazy when i comes to having to browse through someone's gallery. x:
I'll upload some later. I'd do it now but the Wii sucks at copy/paste xD

Offline Schwarz

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #10: May 25, 2008, 11:13:27 AM»
Breasts need to be bigger. MUCH bigger.
I'm glad you realize how miserable your life would be without me.
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Offline Arley

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #11: May 25, 2008, 01:54:06 PM»
Rofl STFU KAIBA xD

Offline Arley

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #12: May 25, 2008, 04:15:13 PM»
Critique portrait added <3

Offline Schwarz

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #13: May 26, 2008, 07:27:38 PM»
Rofl STFU KAIBA xD
Whateva. I'll do what I want.  )<

Anyway, that port is beautyfool. The only thing I notice is that the arms seem a little bit thin in comparison to the torso.
I'm glad you realize how miserable your life would be without me.
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Offline Arley

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #14: May 29, 2008, 03:20:13 PM»
Ah. I tend to have SOMETHING off :/

Offline Morgan

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #15: May 30, 2008, 05:56:00 AM»
i'll redline it when i get home from grad practice, lol e___e

Offline Arley

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #16: May 30, 2008, 03:28:48 PM»
Okidoki. Ty Morgy! #SO

Offline Arley

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #17: June 27, 2008, 05:07:42 PM»
New port added.

Sesruc

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #18: June 27, 2008, 08:22:42 PM»
i personally think the anatomy is fine, especially the the sketch :P

Offline Arley

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #19: June 27, 2008, 09:00:32 PM»
Glad You think so! <3

Offline Sync

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #20: June 27, 2008, 09:02:51 PM»
i personally think the sketch looks fine, but i don't really like the lineart version since the lines are so shaky.

Offline Arley

Re: Tips/critique?
«Reply #21: June 27, 2008, 10:10:31 PM»
i personally think the sketch looks fine, but i don't really like the lineart version since the lines are so shaky.
predictable. It was a quick lineart. It has been modded since someone bought it and looks a little better

Offline Arley

Re: Critiques and tips wanted! n.n
«Reply #22: July 08, 2008, 11:29:10 AM»
Added new crit material.

Offline kt

Re: Critiques and tips wanted! n.n
«Reply #23: July 08, 2008, 06:49:44 PM»
o u suk.

Offline Arley

Re: Critiques and tips wanted! n.n
«Reply #24: July 08, 2008, 06:53:03 PM»