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Author Topic: Help... Please?  (Read 827 times)

Offline Jadyn

Help... Please?
«: May 27, 2008, 10:29:32 AM»
x.x Help....



So far what I've been told what's wrong with it:
Hair falls over his eyes like that makes him look cross eyed.
The nose is a little big.
Arm on the side.. it's hard to tell that is am arm.

So.. can anyone else point out anything wrong, it's prolly gonna be sold as a premade, and I'm honestly gettin' tired of tryin' to do this... This is my... 4th attempt and still no good.

So any suggestions will be good.
« Last Edit: May 30, 2008, 01:31:42 PM by Jadyn »

 
        

Offline Jadyn

Re: Help... Please?
«Reply #1: May 30, 2008, 01:31:49 PM»
New subject...

Jacki-Tomodachi

Re: Help... Please?
«Reply #2: May 30, 2008, 02:01:56 PM»
I think the nose is fine how it is. The eyes are fine aswell...if i could see a bit more of the [viewer's point] left eye's pupil. Thats it. And the only thing i suggest, is that the arm on the left [viewer's point] Is to bring it into view of the port. Thats about it though. everything else is beautiful

Offline Sedde

Re: Help... Please?
«Reply #3: May 30, 2008, 03:05:37 PM»
Eyes and nose are fine. The most glaring problem I see here is with his shoulders. When you raise your arms up and behind your head like that, your shoulders go with it! You might want to look at some pictures of people actually doing this pose in order to get it quite right.

Offline Morgan

Re: Help... Please?
«Reply #4: May 30, 2008, 06:46:33 PM»
OH GOD THE CHIN IT IS HUGE

move the lip down like 7-8 pixels

Offline Mala

Re: Help... Please?
«Reply #5: May 30, 2008, 07:01:47 PM»
personally, i think the nose should be moved down a little.

Offline Lord

Re: Help... Please?
«Reply #6: May 31, 2008, 03:32:07 AM»
personally, i think the nose should be moved down a little.

if they follow morgans advice and move the lips down, it should look better if the nose is moved down as well