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Author Topic: I think I might commision? Help+crits needed? n.n  (Read 813 times)

Offline Astronaut

I think I might commision? Help+crits needed? n.n
«: January 10, 2008, 08:46:51 PM»
I'm thinking here,

Might do flat colored commissions for 1-2 gd :)

1gd flat colored Head shot, 2gd flat colored bust

My Examples are:

http://www.furcartzone.com/index.php?action=gallery;su=user;u=329 -- haven't uploaded as much in FAZ

http://rinotanashi.deviantart.com/art/Raven-71390552 -- Gift for my Friend Mina-chan, her character Raven >__> not furcadia related

http://rinotanashi.deviantart.com/art/Rin-71701351 -- This is um..Rin x3 Shes basically my whole online identity since I was 8... o_o; ehe


I can do feral/human/anthro..

n.n So um... Crits?

And I also wanna know If I should take some cheap commissions... C:

Thanks! :D
Formerly 'Estelle'

 
        

Sesruc

Re: I think I might commision? Help+crits needed? n.n
«Reply #1: January 10, 2008, 09:02:00 PM»
Honestly, at the moment, I wouldn't suggest taking commissions.
Unless if you really want to, there's no one stopping you.

You've got some flaws in your anatomy.
For example, in http://rinotanashi.deviantart.com/art/Aquarium-71782199 :
the shoulders are irregularly shaped, unless it's the shirt or something. :)

Offline Astronaut

Re: I think I might commision? Help+crits needed? n.n
«Reply #2: January 10, 2008, 09:05:03 PM»
Honestly, at the moment, I wouldn't suggest taking commissions.
Unless if you really want to, there's no one stopping you.

You've got some flaws in your anatomy.
For example, in http://rinotanashi.deviantart.com/art/Aquarium-71782199 :
the shoulders are irregularly shaped, unless it's the shirt or something. :)

Thanks, I'll try and fix that xD :)
Formerly 'Estelle'

Offline Mala

Re: I think I might commision? Help+crits needed? n.n
«Reply #3: January 11, 2008, 09:32:41 PM»
Wowzors, you actually made a thread. 8D
Actually gonna crit now kthx dun kill me?

On Raven's piece, her stomach is wildly slender, leading to a wider waist, which might be part of your style, but alter it to seem more realistic?

On Rin's pic, the same thing with the stomach happens again, though much less. And her arms look big compared to the rest of her body, or they could be blending in with her jacket? And her feet are kind of small, but that could be just her anatomy. x3;

And on Aquarium's, her eyes are too far up on her face, they should at least halfway down her head. And, as Sesruc covered, her shoulders are oddly positioned.

For your ferals, I've noticed you have rather small legs/feet. On Astronaut's second ref, her feet are really small. I'm not sure if this was intended, but her toes are also pointing upwards, and shes balancing rather oddly.

Yay for long crits! I await your heavy binder to be thrown at my head on Monday. x_o