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Author Topic: Need some detailed crit/redline.  (Read 672 times)

Offline Tonks

Need some detailed crit/redline.
«: August 13, 2008, 10:37:35 PM»
http://i36.tinypic.com/2prtg04.jpg
I drew it all zoomed in so sorry it's itty bitty. But you can save it if you're going after a red line and zoom in.

So I've been working at it and I've stopped getting better. I need help, mostly with face/hair.. But as you can see it all is totally suckish and needs therapy.

You can price if you want, but personally I wouldn't want one of these, even if it was free, so I don't think it's worth anything.

edit;

look here a bigger one.
http://i35.tinypic.com/98y6ac.jpg
fear the panda.. goat.. lemur thing.

edit 2;
http://i36.tinypic.com/w9jnt0.jpg
mystica (c) sesruc
« Last Edit: August 14, 2008, 03:25:35 PM by Mithril »

 
        

Sesruc

Re: Need some detailed crit/redline.
«Reply #1: August 14, 2008, 09:57:59 AM»


the neck (if you want it to be anatomically correct) should be thicker.

and uhm. your eyes right now look like they're all iris and no white. :P
and what about eyebrows?


otherwise, you're off too a good start!  :D

Offline Tonks

Re: Need some detailed crit/redline.
«Reply #2: August 14, 2008, 02:26:35 PM»
Thanks! xD That helps a lot.

Offline Sedde

Re: Need some detailed crit/redline.
«Reply #3: August 14, 2008, 03:22:15 PM»
If you're gonna post an updated version or summat I'd love to do a redline for eeeet. <3 This is adorable, though.

*itching to do redlines plz*

Offline Tonks

Re: Need some detailed crit/redline.
«Reply #4: August 14, 2008, 03:25:08 PM»
If you're gonna post an updated version or summat I'd love to do a redline for eeeet. <3 This is adorable, though.

*itching to do redlines plz*
C: Hee, I probably won't update that one, because I really don't like it, but you could take a jab at this if you want!

 

anything