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Author Topic: Back after some practice. :3 Pricing and Critique please?  (Read 1257 times)

Offline markiee



Wondering what they're worth after a little practice?
I'm currently charging 4-7 dollars.  Does that sound right?

I LOVE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM. >:0 Just don't be mean.
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Offline Sedde

Re: Pricing | Constructive Criticism pleeease? :3
«Reply #1: September 01, 2008, 06:24:45 PM»
I personally think you have a very adorable, clean-cut style. I'd probably pay 8 GDs at least, and probably more if you got a little more detailed with backgrounds and shading. ;) The shading on Postcard's is beautiful!! I just think you need a teeeensy bit of arm/torso anatomy practice, seeing the other two. I'd be more than happy to do a redline on either or both of them, if you'd like.

Good luck!

Offline lu

Re: Pricing | Constructive Criticism pleeease? :3
«Reply #2: September 03, 2008, 05:08:31 AM»
aww, these are so cute!

i suggest you work a little bit more on your backgrounds, though. and the way you draw torsos/busts.

the way you shade the hair is awesome. i wish i could do that. LOL

7-10 gds or one/two spaces, i guess

Offline markiee

Re: Pricing | Constructive Criticism pleeease? :3
«Reply #3: September 04, 2008, 05:12:40 PM»
Thank you both so much :3

I agree, I've been working on the background thing.  It's not my personal fav. xD

And redlines would be awesome, Dwy. <3
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Offline Sedde

Re: Pricing | Constructive Criticism pleeease? :3
«Reply #4: September 04, 2008, 08:02:19 PM»
Mmkay, here's one. :) If you have trouble reading the text on it...The top one says "Hair should 'flow' more onto arm," and the bottom says "LENGTH: Elbow should be by bottom of ribcage" (roughly).



I also noticed that the proportion of her head to the rest of her body is a little off...Like, her head is a bit too big. x_x BUT that can be a stylistic choice, and I think you pulled it off well, so I didn't change that at all. :B
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Offline markiee

Re: Pricing | Constructive Criticism pleeease? :3
«Reply #5: September 04, 2008, 10:17:02 PM»
<333!

thank you sososo much. that's such a big help

i'm going to work on that as soon as we get power back (i'm on a laptop cause of gustav @[email protected])


n_n! once again, thanks
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Offline Sedde

Re: Pricing | Constructive Criticism pleeease? :3
«Reply #6: September 05, 2008, 04:33:17 PM»
...I forgot to draw in the neck. xD; OH WELL

Good luck!

Offline markiee

Re: Back after some practice. :3 Pricing and Critique please?
«Reply #7: September 16, 2008, 02:21:08 AM»
Bump for the new thread. xD
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Sesruc

Re: Back after some practice. :3 Pricing and Critique please?
«Reply #8: September 16, 2008, 02:54:05 PM»
cute

but all the faces are pointing forward (with the exception of some, but the change's are very subtle). maybe try some further 3/4 views or side views?

Offline markiee

Re: Back after some practice. :3 Pricing and Critique please?
«Reply #9: September 16, 2008, 04:41:41 PM»
Thanks for pointing that out. I'll definitely work on it. <3!
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