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Author Topic: critiques. pricing?  (Read 1211 times)

Offline Miserable

critiques. pricing?
«: February 03, 2008, 09:18:20 AM»


So, I am going back to port making and this is my kick off port.
Pricing ideas, and critiques are welcomed.
Thanks.
« Last Edit: February 16, 2008, 07:38:11 PM by Miserable »

 
        

Sesruc

Re: Pricing ideers.
«Reply #1: February 03, 2008, 10:49:38 AM»
3 GD.

Offline Mala

Re: Pricing ideers.
«Reply #2: February 03, 2008, 12:39:27 PM»
3-4GD

Offline Miserable

Re: critiques.
«Reply #3: February 09, 2008, 03:56:35 PM»
critque me

Offline Lord

Re: critiques.
«Reply #4: February 09, 2008, 04:51:58 PM»
it looks like the head is lopsided, or flat, whatever, on the right side. try rounding it out, evening out the eyes, and having the hair flow with the form. i'd also try to include a bit more of the character themselfszfzsfdsa in it. the background is nice, but it looks like the focus of the portrait is the fire, not the character

Offline Miserable

Re: critiques.
«Reply #5: February 09, 2008, 04:56:06 PM»
thank you so much.
let me go round that head out and fix up the hair.

Offline Miserable

Re: critiques. pricing?
«Reply #6: February 10, 2008, 08:45:43 AM»
:) took in julies crit.
new port edition up

Offline Miserable

Re: critiques. pricing?
«Reply #7: February 16, 2008, 07:39:11 PM»
new port

Offline Sync

Re: critiques. pricing?
«Reply #8: February 16, 2008, 08:29:58 PM»
i think the shading needs to be more intense. not to be unrealistic, but to make it look nicer.

and i think there needs to be more turn on the body or less turn on the head. it is very uncomfortable to have you head that turned and hold it.
and the boobs are kind of big.
and i think she needs more of a waist.

Offline Mala

Re: critiques. pricing?
«Reply #9: February 16, 2008, 08:33:16 PM»
There should be more arm. Right now it looks as if the arm just shrinks. As you near the hand, it should get a tad bit wider.

And like Sana said, holding your head like that is rather uncomfortable. I can't even do that XD

Offline Miserable

Re: critiques. pricing?
«Reply #10: February 16, 2008, 08:47:47 PM»
Thanks guys :)
THe pose is based on a pin-up style.

 

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