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Offline Mind Games

NEW!
«: November 15, 2008, 12:53:31 AM»
Done secretly for a friend who doesn't visit Faz so its all good. I'm really proud of this and ofcourse it became a little funky since I jpged it. Just wanted some crits on it so when I do another port I can get better C: And also, If I were to start port sales. How much would you price them?
Also new sig! Tired of a scribble M, so I'll go by my first rl inital
Since my friend's name is Billy, I made him a goat. Baaaaah He's gonna hate me lol

Yay for stoners! <:

Also if I see this on another alt, I'll be kicking ass.
« Last Edit: November 19, 2008, 11:45:35 PM by Ghoulie »

 
        

Offline Sedde

Re: Critsss
«Reply #1: November 15, 2008, 11:16:31 AM»
I think this is going beautifully! The shading on the hair is superb. :)

Offline Mind Games

Re: Critsss
«Reply #2: November 16, 2008, 12:59:17 AM»
I think this is going beautifully! The shading on the hair is superb. :)

Thank you c: <3

Offline Mind Games

Re: NEW!
«Reply #3: November 19, 2008, 11:45:48 PM»
Bump! New port C:

Offline Lovedoll

Re: NEW!
«Reply #4: November 22, 2008, 10:38:37 AM»
I say 5-10GD sounds pretty good for a port like this. :)

For crits, I really only have one thing that bugs me a little. The neck and shoulders seem a little thin and narrow, even for a character who's naturally slim and lean. Thumb rule is, shoulders are three heads in width, give or take a few anatomical differences in each individual and build.

I'd also try not to give the lines for collarbone and neck such a distinct line. It's a shadow more than anything, it'll look much more natural if you shade it a little lighter, make it stand out a bit less. :)

Offline Mind Games

Re: NEW!
«Reply #5: November 22, 2008, 11:54:07 PM»
Thanks guys!

And Starri I'll keep the shoulder width in mind <3