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Offline SLASHERS.

Redline and critique
«: February 04, 2008, 05:16:09 PM»
just looking for some critique on a drawing. its a drawing for my friend paige for one of her alts, i plan to color it later, after i fix it. and this is how i would normally draw a person, so i was just wondering what i could tweak to make it better. i know for one thing, im terrible at feet and legs. the arms arent great either. but anyways:



i know the image is a bit dark, but go for the redline if you want, i'd really appreciate it.

thanks for taking a look

 
        

Offline Experience

Re: Redline and critique
«Reply #1: February 04, 2008, 05:33:51 PM»

Something along those lines.

She needed armpits.
Her right foot was too skinny.
Her shirt wouldn't have gone in a nice arch, at the bottom.
Right ear would be further down, head would be lower.
Middle finger, the the one beside it, on her left hand (her left) would need to be longer.

If I were you, I'd make her torso longer, too.
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Sesruc

Re: Redline and critique
«Reply #2: February 04, 2008, 06:13:36 PM»


the collarbone should be that low. (:

 

anything