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Author Topic: Critique  (Read 784 times)

Offline Kroynx

Critique
«: December 10, 2008, 03:04:38 PM»


should i continue with this or scrap it :-\
also i'd like tips on how i could improve the lines so far like proportion because i'm not used to drawing as realistic as this
THANX
did i mention that i will love you :-*
« Last Edit: December 10, 2008, 03:37:58 PM by Kroynx »
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Offline Sedde

Re: Critique
«Reply #1: December 10, 2008, 04:26:54 PM»
I think the proportions are good, though I'm a bit weirded out by the apparent lack of ears. O_o Or...lips or a nose. I don't count a single line as a nose. xP What were you planning on doing with this?

Offline Hugo

Re: Critique
«Reply #2: December 10, 2008, 08:38:33 PM»
Very animesque. Looks like my traditional stuff back when I used a cheap scanner that ate half my lines. If you use shading in place of black lines, this will look fine.

Offline Kroynx

Re: Critique
«Reply #3: December 15, 2008, 03:49:26 PM»
i usually shade in the lips or they look out of place if i line them to me..
i've resized and sharpened it a lil now
i'm sooo busy so i haven't had time blahblahblah
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