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Author Topic: Premade- Crits or Price?  (Read 746 times)

Cremello

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Premade- Crits or Price?
«: February 15, 2008, 02:26:02 PM»

 
        

Offline Lord

Re: Premade- Crits or Price?
«Reply #1: February 15, 2008, 02:39:41 PM»
the only thing right now that i can say is that the head is a little too .... how should i put this.

the muzzle seems to come straight out of the head. try to make it flow a little bit smoother.

Offline dictate

Re: Premade- Crits or Price?
«Reply #2: February 15, 2008, 02:41:02 PM»
i think you did a really good job shading, (something i have trouble with myself), but the anatomy is a BIT off.
the line separating the halves of the muzzle extends a little too far, and the muzzle itself is a little too 'box-shaped' or at least too straight off of the head.
unless that was your intention. in that case, i apologize.
kind of confusing, but. what will help is looking more closely at wolf profiles~
har har.

Cremello

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Re: Premade- Crits or Price?
«Reply #3: February 15, 2008, 02:49:32 PM»
Lol thankies the both of ya

 

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