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Author Topic: -- Critique/and/or/Price-- c: Pwease.  (Read 692 times)

Offline Storm Tundra

-- Critique/and/or/Price-- c: Pwease.
«: January 14, 2009, 03:38:32 PM»
Okay well..
I haven't been making ports for awhile but I have just started up again.
That would probably be why you see such a difference in the two examples I will show you.
Anywho,
I was wondering if anyone could please critique?
Pricing would be great to if you want.
Any help at all is appreciated since I really want to start being successful
with commish's and my art in general.


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Offline Storm Tundra

Re: -- Critique/and/or/Price-- c: Pwease.
«Reply #1: January 16, 2009, 07:01:25 AM»
Pwease...



Offline Kiaren

Re: -- Critique/and/or/Price-- c: Pwease.
«Reply #2: January 16, 2009, 08:05:11 AM»
Hmm..for pricing I'd say between 5-10 gds. For critique, I'm not real good at this so....I can't say much >.>  But to me, they look fine.   :]

Offline Jade Ravenwing

Re: -- Critique/and/or/Price-- c: Pwease.
«Reply #3: January 16, 2009, 07:38:00 PM»
I agree with Disco on 5-10 GD

As for crits on the second port the nose is... well... crooked. Canines noses don't usually curve down that way, they're straight with a bit of an even curve on the top, though it just be part of the character. (bad choice of wording). The eyes on the second one are also rather large, though that could be partially to style. The right ear seems a bit... odd at the base. Like it has a bulge or something. Otherwise I don't see much to crit.

Only thing I see worth critting on the first one is the mouth. Try giving it a bit more depth to it instead of an endless black hole.

Hope this helps, and it may not be the best advice but it's what I see wrong.