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Author Topic: crits?  (Read 647 times)

Claudie

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crits?
«: May 02, 2009, 08:20:45 PM»

this is a portrait of one of my friends... yeah. i know his nose is a little large.

i was going for a looser shading style than i'm used to doing with graphite, so i think that some areas kinda look wonky.
the background's kind of a cop-out...

BUTUHM. yeah. i'm asking for... technique criticisms and suggestions pretty much, if you could.


sorry the scan's a little sloppy on the left side. my piece of illustration board was... maybe a centimeter too large for my scanner. ):



thank you.

 
        

Offline /gage/

Re: crits?
«Reply #1: May 02, 2009, 10:41:35 PM»
looks pretty nice. i think the ear might be a bit too small, though.

Offline Heimdall

Re: crits?
«Reply #2: May 02, 2009, 11:53:34 PM»
Don't be afraid of contrast! It looks nice. Try doing some deeper shadows on the skin! It's so hard in traditional media sometimes but you can do it.