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Author Topic: port critique  (Read 981 times)

Offline ding

port critique
«: June 18, 2009, 05:42:21 AM»


would especially like crits for arm/hands and the boobs..
something about them seems wrong, can't put my finger on it.

redlines also welcome.

 
        

Offline Nny

Re: port critique
«Reply #1: June 18, 2009, 08:37:41 AM»
Hnn... the only thing I can really see wrong with it is that her boobs should both be between her arms.
So that one boob kinda looks like it would be an armpit boob where it's placed right now.
I would do a redline but it's like 6:30 in the morning and I haven't slept so it would be all over the place, I might come back and do one later.

On a side note, I really like how you shaded the hair...
« Last Edit: June 18, 2009, 01:46:30 PM by Nny »

Offline Suzy

Re: port critique
«Reply #2: June 18, 2009, 12:03:16 PM»
It's really gorgeous! I second Nny's comment. Your hands seem okay. They fit the regular proportions that I have been told; the palm is about as long as the distance from the bottom of the nose to the chin. As for the whole hand, it should be able to cover their face. You might want to make her fingers a teeny bit longer. I do tend to favor styles with long fingers though, so I could be wrong. :3

Offline Feri

Re: port critique
«Reply #3: June 18, 2009, 01:48:51 PM»
Your hands are more than okay, they're excellent.

I did a really basic redline to show kind of where the problem is...



The problem is it has to be one or the other... either she is facing forward, or she is turned to her side. And her boobs must go with her!

I also noticed something when I cut and paste your image into paint to redline-- it's 90 x 94?

Your portrait is amazing. I hope you find a way to make it to your liking. 8D

Offline Suzy

Re: port critique
«Reply #4: June 19, 2009, 08:03:43 PM»
The face feels like it has no structure. :(

Hmm. Actually, I agree. It's very round (something I myself do xD).

 

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