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Author Topic: crits please?  (Read 798 times)

Offline schopenhauer

crits please?
«: December 23, 2009, 03:08:02 PM»


on any aspect of this, please.
redline, do whatever.

 
        

Offline Rex T-Rex

Re: crits please?
«Reply #1: December 23, 2009, 07:24:31 PM»
I know you're going for bloody, but everything is so dark that I can barely see most of the image. Like... I can't even make out what I think is supposed to be the victim's arm. If  that is the arm, it looks rather short.. It would help if you just posted the lineart along with the colored version so that it is easier to see what's going on and easier to give advise.
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Offline schopenhauer

Re: crits please?
«Reply #2: December 23, 2009, 09:38:56 PM»
i worked on this on a few computers and am on a friend's right now and the image isn't dark (for me).

the victim's arm is short because it's been ripped off.

Offline Rex T-Rex

Re: crits please?
«Reply #3: December 24, 2009, 02:07:08 AM»
Ah, that makes more sense, still rather difficult to tell. Looks kinda paper torn, not quite torn flesh, that that can also be a style thing.
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Offline neca

Re: crits please?
«Reply #4: January 01, 2010, 09:53:59 PM»
This image is showing up really dark and muddled together for me as well on my display, making it kind of difficult to give much feedback. :(

 

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